Help wanted: making this book cover better

Working Out LoudI shared the latest draft version of the book cover with friends on Facebook and they had no problem telling me what they thought about it. “Don’t like the red.”

“I like the connections between the Os.”

“Feels gimmicky.”

“Very clean.”

My 14 year old son, after reviewing a cover variation that included photos of people, sent me a particularly blunt text message:

“Okay, wow. The pics are scary.”

People felt differently about the color, font, even whether to include my middle initial. Despite the sometimes conflicting opinions though, the feedback was helpful in further shaping the design as well as my thinking. So now I'm sharing the complete book jacket with all of you. After all, when it comes to working out loud, who better to tell me what works and doesn’t work than the readers of this blog?

The best comment you could make

The book will be available as both a paperback and ebook via Amazon and perhaps some other online channels. Since I’m self-publishing, the book won’t appear in stores unless I bring copies there, so people will only see the cover online. I’m still investigating distribution possibilities and the best way to get a good hardcover version printed.

For more information about the book, click here. If you’d like to read the latest draft and provide feedback, just ask for a copy and I will gladly send you one.

If you want to keep it simple, you could list just two things in a comment below:

  1. The thing you liked most.
  2. The thing you’d want me to change.

Please feel free to post more ideas. Ask yourself: Would I feel good handing this book to a friend? I appreciate any and all suggestions on the color, font, text, subtitle, my photo. Anything. The best comment you could make is anything you think will make the book better.

I appreciate you taking the time to post your suggestions. Thank you.

Two possible front covers

Working Out Loud

Book cover (white)

Inside front and back flaps

Book - inside flaps

Back cover text

 

Book - rear cover